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Postby Music Chickie » Fri Jan 18, 2008 10:03 pm

Hey everybody. I found this poem on the internet and I like it. I just want everybody's opinion on it, to win a bet with my friend. So pretty please rate the poem from one to five!!!



Failure and Do-overs


I never have to try,
So I don’t.

I fail.

Now I know
I have to try,
So I do.

I fail.

I must not have been
Trying hard enough.
I try harder.

I fail.

I give up hope,
But I still say
That I try.

I fail.

I am told that
I have not been trying.
I cannot deny it
Because it is partially true.

I refuse to admit
That much.

So I try again,
To cover up that
I wasn’t trying.

I fail.

And it is my fault.
Not because it is,
But because it
Has to be.

When bad things happen,
People have to be
Blamed.

So now I know
That it is my fault,
Only because it is
No one else’s.

And now everybody knows
That it is my fault.

But I get to
Start over.
I get to start over
Because of
God.

Because do-overs is
What he does.
And what he gives.

And I am so
Grateful.
*hugs*
~Emily~

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Postby draglist » Fri Jan 18, 2008 10:08 pm

It's a five because you posted it, dear. bp
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Postby jim sanders » Fri Jan 18, 2008 11:23 pm

8) I read it twice so i'll give it a 10
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Postby Bob Kraemer » Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:50 am

Excellent poem Emily!!!!
Brought tears to my eyes :( :) , I rate it a 5 on your scale.
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Postby Jim Kalb » Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:54 am

very cool, :D .i give it a ten.

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Postby Mr. Jean » Sat Jan 19, 2008 8:17 am

Nice 5 to me. 8)
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Postby Gator » Sat Jan 19, 2008 8:58 am

Excellent Emily..
A true statement (poem) of life..ecspecially my own.
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Postby Rapid Randy Baker » Sat Jan 19, 2008 9:14 am

M, that is a great way to describe life. No matter what, get up and do it over again everyday, trying your best. Nice poem M. I rate it a 5 as well. 8)
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Postby Lippy » Sat Jan 19, 2008 1:17 pm

Excellent M !!!!!!!!! :D :D
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